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Birthday gift to *fortissimo, because is her birthday today. I was working in the sketch for all this week. is not complex, still is a frontal, and faces always looks awnful in my frontals. After some epic fails, I got serious and I started to research what's wrong with me when I draw frontal faces... and I noticed I actually had something wrong innherent in my own style, so I fixed it for this piccie. The face dont look perfect, but at least is a good try ^^ - sorry for the looong neck XD. Español Regalo de cumpleaños para *fortissimo, porque es su cumpleñaos hoy. he estado trabajando en el boceto este durante toda la semana, no porque sea especialmente complejo, sino porque cuando dibujo frontales las caras me kedan fatal. despues de unos cuantos "epic fails", me puse serio e investigue que es lo que iva mal en mi estilo, y realmente descubri que habia algo ke hacia mal desde hace la tira y ke no me daba cuenta, asi que lo arregle en este dibujo. La cara no me ha kedado perfecta, pero al menos no es como los otros ke hice. Perdon por el cuello tan largo! XD Symphony is a (c) of *fortissimo Comments
Gracias ^^
ya XP dibujar manos es un palo XP, y al entintar creo ke se me ha fastidiado aun mas =_= (estos rotrings... pero es ke a vectorial me podia pasar todo el fin de semana y el cumple era hoy... aunke si te he de ser sincero, una vez el dibujo estaba acabado, como no me gustaban las lineas vectorice mas o menos el 60% de el xD) -- "Knowledge is the real power" |
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Anyway, what I think you can improve on is drawing hands. The hands seems to been drawn in the same angle. Her left hand looks strange, as if she's not really holding the violin and is almost dropping it. Her right hand looks fine, though I'm missing where her thumb goes so maybe if you drew the thumb it would be more clear that she's really holding on the violin bow with her whole hand. However, I suggest to try drawing hands in different angles.
Her face seems a bit long. Her nose and mouth are placed too far down on her face. Maybe if you tried to move it up closer to her eyes and move the nose a bit apart from her mouth it would look better?
And just one little thing, it looks like her right leg is disappearing behind her left, but maybe that's just me. XD
Well, there you go. ^^ I hope I could help you in some way and that I didn't sound mean or anything. Anyway, great work with pic! I'm sure *fortissimo loved it!
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